Little girl loved her dad
But THE CARING DAD left her all sad
When she was pretty and young
She had this teeny tiny heart, pair of kidneys and lungs
Then she took hold of her dad’s finger and learned to walk
Hearing him speak, she learned to talk
It was his dream to see his daughter becoming a great person
Who will be acknowledged by all, even by the greatest one
One fine day, the girl asked her dad an i-pod
But, the father brought her a record
She couldn’t understand what her father meant
Cuz, how would the poor girl understand what her loved one dreamt
One day, she asked her dad to bring her phone
Father taught her how to apply for a loan
She never understood
Cuz in the front it was her father always who stood
Her angel father asked her to study well for examz
But she didn’t do that well
She asked him to teach her how to draw banners
But at first, he taught her ground manners
She could never understand
Cuz she never gave her father a friendship band
A month earlier to friendship day
She decided to bring tulips of friendship between her dad and herself
Later, unfortunately , her dad left this world one day
And truly, unfortunately it was friendship day
3:45 in the morning she was told to wake up
And then she was informed of her father’s death
When her dad was getting buried into sand
She threw that friendship band in the sand
Now that her father left,
He left her with just thoughts and lessons that he taught
And now she understood, why her dad gave her a record
Cuz he wanted to see his daughter breaking all the records
And now she understood, why her dad taught her apply for a loan
Cuz he never wants his daughter to be help less and alone
And today, now, she cracked a job interview
Cuz , of the manners her dad taught her
Now was she slowly getting to know what her father meant
All that her father had dreamt
But, now it was too late
Cuz her dad’s name already got a prefix “late”
Well, according to hospital report
Dad got a cardiopulmonary stroke
She kept holding her dad’s finger tight which made her walk
But now her dad lying dead dint even talk
She cried , cried and cried
And her dad was already on heaven’s ride
Slowly… her caring and loving dad left sweet little girl sad
But poor girl still loves her dad
But THE CARING DAD left her all sad
When she was pretty and young
She had this teeny tiny heart, pair of kidneys and lungs
Then she took hold of her dad’s finger and learned to walk
Hearing him speak, she learned to talk
It was his dream to see his daughter becoming a great person
Who will be acknowledged by all, even by the greatest one
One fine day, the girl asked her dad an i-pod
But, the father brought her a record
She couldn’t understand what her father meant
Cuz, how would the poor girl understand what her loved one dreamt
One day, she asked her dad to bring her phone
Father taught her how to apply for a loan
She never understood
Cuz in the front it was her father always who stood
Her angel father asked her to study well for examz
But she didn’t do that well
She asked him to teach her how to draw banners
But at first, he taught her ground manners
She could never understand
Cuz she never gave her father a friendship band
A month earlier to friendship day
She decided to bring tulips of friendship between her dad and herself
Later, unfortunately , her dad left this world one day
And truly, unfortunately it was friendship day
3:45 in the morning she was told to wake up
And then she was informed of her father’s death
When her dad was getting buried into sand
She threw that friendship band in the sand
Now that her father left,
He left her with just thoughts and lessons that he taught
And now she understood, why her dad gave her a record
Cuz he wanted to see his daughter breaking all the records
And now she understood, why her dad taught her apply for a loan
Cuz he never wants his daughter to be help less and alone
And today, now, she cracked a job interview
Cuz , of the manners her dad taught her
Now was she slowly getting to know what her father meant
All that her father had dreamt
But, now it was too late
Cuz her dad’s name already got a prefix “late”
Well, according to hospital report
Dad got a cardiopulmonary stroke
She kept holding her dad’s finger tight which made her walk
But now her dad lying dead dint even talk
She cried , cried and cried
And her dad was already on heaven’s ride
Slowly… her caring and loving dad left sweet little girl sad
But poor girl still loves her dad
Gud :)
ReplyDeletethnks di :*
DeleteNyc sis O:)
ReplyDeletetysm :)
ReplyDeleteUa feelingz are sumthn beyond wordz baby sister! I truly felt the pain hidden in ua poem! Truly proud!
ReplyDeleteNice poem....:-)
ReplyDeletethnx a lot faru di.......;>
ReplyDeletethnx a lot faru di.......;>
ReplyDelete:)
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful poem of cherishable moments....
ReplyDeleteur r blessed n will always remain blessed belated happy birthday ashu
thank u so much sir.........!
DeleteVery well written ashu
ReplyDeletethnx di :)
Deletethnx di :)
DeleteGud ashu .. Well written ..:-)
ReplyDeleteThnx Di...
Deletethis is awesome, i am proud of you, god bless
ReplyDeleteThnq sir......:)
DeleteThnq sir......:)
DeleteU r truly amazing Asmita.... I am so touched by the poem... Ur dad was a gem of a person with a golden heart, he must be so proud of u by now and so I am Asmita... Great job done ������ stay blessed ����
ReplyDeleteThnx.........a lotttt.....ur complement makes me feel more proud.:)
DeleteThnx a lottt sir....
ReplyDeleteAllah khush rakhe salamt rakhe....har khwaish apki poori ho....allah apke pappa ko jannat naseeb kare...may the almighty give u all that u need...
ReplyDeleteTysm....
DeleteAshu
ReplyDeleteYour dad was a wonderful person always energetic, hardworking, helping others in need and he would feel proud when you keep on climbing steps of growth and success.
We always pray for him that
"HIS SOUL MAY REST IN ETERNAL PEACE "
Amen
Ashu
ReplyDeleteYour dad was a wonderful person always energetic, hardworking, helping others in need and he would feel proud when you keep on climbing steps of growth and success.
We always pray for him that
"HIS SOUL MAY REST IN ETERNAL PEACE "
Amen
Thnx a lot sir.....I'm touched
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ReplyDeleteTysm Alisha.....
ReplyDeleteAsh....!!!
ReplyDeleteTruly amazed by the poem....I really felt goosebumps while reading the poem
Srsly applaud you for this
Proud of you n even blessed to have a friend lyk u
#Keepsmiling
Tysm.....alisha hpy to have a frnd lyk u swty......:))
DeleteRLY NICE POEM...........
ReplyDeleteU R RLY GRT ASHU
Thnx.....:)
Deletereally heart touching asmitha did grt work keep it up...:)
ReplyDeleteTysm Di......
DeleteEvry tym I read I cudnt believe...
ReplyDeleteY god has ,to be so mean...
Wen I reach the end I calm nd soothe...
Knowing that u r happy wth the destiny's rule... love u ashh...♡
Thnx a lotttt di......luv 2....keep inspiring me like always....:)
ReplyDeleteAshu@life belongs to the living&you(ashu)who lives must be prepared for changes...i think by today ur totally free from that worst situation..hope u have great nd bright futuer...may urs father soul may rest in peace
ReplyDeleteTysm Shiva....
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ReplyDeleteDear wt u said me?
ReplyDeleteAm nt different
Am nt different
Generally people don't easily accept da truth nd u proved it again
Dear ur just unique yaar
These blog just touched my soul
May Ur pappa's soul REST IN PEACE#
Thnx a Lott....it really is phenomenon to know that people see me in different li8!!tysm buddy
DeleteOmg!!!
ReplyDeleteAm really very sorry Asmita
But very bold enough to handle ur life
May ur dads soul rest in peace..!!
Tysm frnd..... believe me when I say I'm nt that strong n bold......bt thnx anyway....it really means a Lott!!
DeleteBeautifully written :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot!! Do read my other poems , hope ull find them great as well :)
DeleteThe death of someone close to us leave us shocked with grief. We cannot understand how one minute this person was here and the next they are gone. The truth is that those we love are never truly gone. The body may have run its course, but the soul lives forever.
ReplyDeleteMemories are all I have
and some pictures too,
but those can't make up for
all the years without you.
I wish you were here,
but you cannot be.
You were taken too early,
but you're watching over me.
It's hard not to miss you.
Sometimes I have to cry.
Even when you're not there,
I know you're standing by.
The last thing that I said
made me very sad.
I gave you a kiss
and said, "I love you, Dad."