FrienDaughter


Little girl loved her dad
But THE CARING DAD left her all sad

When she was pretty and young 
She had this teeny tiny heart, pair of kidneys and lungs

Then she took hold of her dad’s finger and learned  to walk
Hearing him speak, she learned  to talk 

It was his dream to see his daughter becoming a great person
Who will be acknowledged by all, even by the greatest one

One fine day, the girl asked her dad an i-pod
But, the father brought her a record

She couldn’t understand what her father meant
Cuz, how would the poor girl understand what her loved one dreamt

One day, she asked her dad to bring her phone
Father taught her how to apply for a loan

She never understood
Cuz in the front it was her father always who stood

Her angel father asked her to study well for examz
But she didn’t do that well

She asked him to teach her how to draw banners
But at first, he taught her ground manners

She could never understand
Cuz she never gave her father a friendship band

A month earlier to friendship day 
She decided to bring tulips of friendship between her dad and herself

Later, unfortunately , her dad left this world one day
And truly, unfortunately it was friendship day

3:45 in the morning she was told to wake up 
And then she was informed of her father’s death

When her dad was getting buried into sand
She threw that friendship band in the sand

Now that her father left, 
He left her with just thoughts and lessons that he taught

And now she understood, why her dad gave her a record 
Cuz he wanted to see his daughter breaking all the records

And now she understood, why her dad taught her apply for a loan
Cuz he never wants his daughter to be help less and alone

And today, now, she cracked a job interview 
Cuz , of the manners her dad taught her

Now was she slowly getting to know what her father meant
All that her father had dreamt

But, now it was too late
Cuz her dad’s name already got a prefix “late”

Well, according to hospital report
Dad got a cardiopulmonary stroke

She kept holding her dad’s finger tight which made her walk
But now her dad lying dead dint even talk

She cried , cried and cried
And her dad was already on heaven’s ride

Slowly… her caring and loving dad left sweet little girl sad
But poor girl still loves her dad 

Comments

  1. Ua feelingz are sumthn beyond wordz baby sister! I truly felt the pain hidden in ua poem! Truly proud!

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  2. Nice poem....:-)

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  3. Very beautiful poem of cherishable moments....
    ur r blessed n will always remain blessed belated happy birthday ashu

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  4. Very well written ashu

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  5. Gud ashu .. Well written ..:-)

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  6. this is awesome, i am proud of you, god bless

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  7. U r truly amazing Asmita.... I am so touched by the poem... Ur dad was a gem of a person with a golden heart, he must be so proud of u by now and so I am Asmita... Great job done ������ stay blessed ����

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    1. Thnx.........a lotttt.....ur complement makes me feel more proud.:)

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  8. Allah khush rakhe salamt rakhe....har khwaish apki poori ho....allah apke pappa ko jannat naseeb kare...may the almighty give u all that u need...

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  9. Ashu

    Your dad was a wonderful person always energetic, hardworking, helping others in need and he would feel proud when you keep on climbing steps of growth and success.

    We always pray for him that

    "HIS SOUL MAY REST IN ETERNAL PEACE "

    Amen

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  10. Ashu

    Your dad was a wonderful person always energetic, hardworking, helping others in need and he would feel proud when you keep on climbing steps of growth and success.

    We always pray for him that

    "HIS SOUL MAY REST IN ETERNAL PEACE "

    Amen

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  12. Ash....!!!
    Truly amazed by the poem....I really felt goosebumps while reading the poem
    Srsly applaud you for this
    Proud of you n even blessed to have a friend lyk u
    #Keepsmiling

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    1. Tysm.....alisha hpy to have a frnd lyk u swty......:))

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  13. RLY NICE POEM...........
    U R RLY GRT ASHU

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  14. really heart touching asmitha did grt work keep it up...:)

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  15. Evry tym I read I cudnt believe...
    Y god has ,to be so mean...
    Wen I reach the end I calm nd soothe...
    Knowing that u r happy wth the destiny's rule... love u ashh...♡

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  16. Thnx a lotttt di......luv 2....keep inspiring me like always....:)

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  17. Ashu@life belongs to the living&you(ashu)who lives must be prepared for changes...i think by today ur totally free from that worst situation..hope u have great nd bright futuer...may urs father soul may rest in peace

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  20. Dear wt u said me?
    Am nt different
    Am nt different
    Generally people don't easily accept da truth nd u proved it again
    Dear ur just unique yaar

    These blog just touched my soul
    May Ur pappa's soul REST IN PEACE#

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    1. Thnx a Lott....it really is phenomenon to know that people see me in different li8!!tysm buddy

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  21. Omg!!!
    Am really very sorry Asmita
    But very bold enough to handle ur life
    May ur dads soul rest in peace..!!

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    1. Tysm frnd..... believe me when I say I'm nt that strong n bold......bt thnx anyway....it really means a Lott!!

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  22. Beautifully written :)

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    1. Thanks a lot!! Do read my other poems , hope ull find them great as well :)

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  23. Ameen Sundrani22 May 2020 at 04:15

    The death of someone close to us leave us shocked with grief. We cannot understand how one minute this person was here and the next they are gone. The truth is that those we love are never truly gone. The body may have run its course, but the soul lives forever.

    Memories are all I have
    and some pictures too,
    but those can't make up for
    all the years without you.

    I wish you were here,
    but you cannot be.
    You were taken too early,
    but you're watching over me.

    It's hard not to miss you.
    Sometimes I have to cry.
    Even when you're not there,
    I know you're standing by.

    The last thing that I said
    made me very sad.
    I gave you a kiss
    and said, "I love you, Dad."

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